Talk:Vampire Doll: Guilt-Na-Zan

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This section sounds a little advert-esque to me:-

"It is an upbeat, must read, manga comedy, rated 13+, which makes fun of such things as vampires, cross-dressing, and role playing games."

Should it be modified? --Scareth (talk) 16:46, 20 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Sure, when you see awful things like that, don't hesitate to fix them without asking. Bikasuishin (talk) 21:33, 29 March 2008 (UTC)