Talk:Vance Monument/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Chilicave (talk · contribs) 14:14, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Hey there! Will be reviewing this article of the course of the week. Please note that I'm getting into the groove learning how to review articles so bare with me.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it well written?
 * A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
 * B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * 1) Is it verifiable with no original research?
 * A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
 * B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
 * C. It contains no original research:
 * D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
 * B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Comments


 * In lead paragraph, "Other contributors included Jewsih organizations and politicians and businesses from Pennsylvania, Maryland, and Massachusetts." Is that supposed to be "Jewish"?
 * ✅ Thanks for fixing! Rublamb (talk) 02:00, 22 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Source 128 seems like WP:DEADREF
 * ✅ Updated with link to archived copy Rublamb (talk) 02:00, 22 October 2023 (UTC)


 * I must say, this 7,000 word article sits neatly at the cusp of "completeness." Definitely have to appreciate the hard work put into this (especially the impressive collection of facts from newspaper trimmings) I have so much to take away from you! This was a good, insightful read. Deserves a pass.