Talk:Vladimir Pokrovskii

Research section is too ambiguous
The research section does not clearly explain what the subject's CONTRIBUTIONS to the areas described are. Rather, these are broad descriptions of the areas that the subject has WORKED IN - at least, that's how the text reads at present. The language of this section needs to be much more focused on what this person's specific contributions and achievements were - this is not a CV, resume, or review article.

Currently I don't see a simple way to fix this other than to strip out most of the text, so I thought I would try to get a conversation going here and hope that someone will instead do some significant and productive editing. Qflib, aka KeeYou Flib (talk) 14:47, 13 February 2023 (UTC)