Talk:Xerxes I inscription at Van

Copy edit
Hi Louis. A belated happy New Year to you. I hope that things are well in your world. Another nice, slightly offbeat article. A couple of comments. Shout if you have any queries or complaints about the copy edit. 00:19, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * You might want to think about using Template:Infobox monument.
 * You could do with a proper structure. The current lead has information not covered in the body. I have inserted a couple of section headers and reordered the sections, You will want to check and possibly revert them.
 * In the lead you say it is next to the Van Fortress, in the text, at Tushpa. This seems inconsistent.

The article is also missing information on when was the inscription discovered by archaeologists, and whether Turkey has taken actions for the preservation of the inscription. Dimadick (talk) 13:38, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Thank you. A belated happy New Year to you as well. May 2019 bring joy, peace, and happiness to you and your family. Yeah I'm aware that the article is not complete; I just decided to rewrite it from scratch, having found it in this state. I appreciate the ideas/suggestions (incl. Dimadick's). Cheers, - LouisAragon (talk) 14:39, 18 January 2019 (UTC)