Talk:Yang Fuqing

NPOV
I believe some parts need to be re-written or removed, especially this part: "He rather lay down and drop his last blood on China mainland the great homeland！ Yang‘s action of back China to make people emotion endless and respected. He really a Martyr for Chinese revolution." Erebus Morgaine (talk) 11:28, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

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I have removed some content that is unclear, such as "Some pseudohistorys said Yang bring Hong‘s son to US", where the reader has no idea who Hong or his son is. Please add this part with more information and be clearer if adding. I have also removed some non-NPOV statements. There was a lot of unnecessarily decorative phrases as well. I believe that there may be a lot more information that could be added to this article, but these issues should be avoided when adding them. Cheers. C h a m a l talk work 14:04, 14 October 2008 (UTC)