Talk:Zach Hyman

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Review: January 26, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ikhtiar H (talk · contribs) 08:19, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this. I will go section by section. Ikhtiar H (talk) 08:19, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead section[edit]

The University of Michigan awards looks to much clumsy. It will be good to only keep the "Athlete of the Year" award. (DONE)

Playing career[edit]

Junior[edit]

A lot of references needed in the last part of the section. The first part looks fine as the references are already cited.

International play[edit]

First paragraph citation needed. (Done)

Career statistics[edit]

I would suggest to move the picture to the Awards and achievements section to make it convenient. (done)

Additional comments[edit]

I keep this on hold for 7 days. In the interim, the problems must be solved. Ikhtiar H (talk) 10:25, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Editor's progress, comments and updates[edit]

Thanks for reviewing! Information is very difficult to find on College players but I'll do my best to address these needs! Will likely work on them in a few days. Spilia4 (talk) 19:42, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead section and Career Statistics done. I made a few additions to the lead and kept the Hobey Bakers award nomination, since that's the highest player honor. Still working! Spilia4 (talk) 03:49, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Spilia4: I am extending the review deadline to more 5 days since you have started editing. So it is on 25 January 2016. Ikhtiar H (talk) 09:16, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Ikhtiar H: Thanks! I can't even remember if I mentioned I would need an extension, so thank you for the additional 5 days.Spilia4 (talk) 17:23, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Working on it now, will hopefully have these requests done in an hour or two!Spilia4 (talk) 20:55, 25 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Ikhtiar H: Looks like I've completed everything you've asked for. If there are any other concerns, let me know!Spilia4 (talk) 21:41, 25 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Final result[edit]

@Spilia4: the lead still have some problems. He is a hockey player in general, so why not mention it first? "All American" should be linked. "the U20 Three Nations Cup" is not linked as well. Even if the page does not exists, it can kept. See WP:RL. As these were some minor edits, I just fixed them having bold rights according to the rules of reviewing! I must give credit to the nominator and thus Listing this as a good one. But don't forget that there's a gap between good and featured articles. If you want to go for it, more works need to be done, especially in the Writing career section. Ikhtiar H (talk) 11:37, 26 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Ikhtiar H: Thanks, it was fun doing this! And don't worry, this'll remain just a good article, it's actually decent when compared to most College/AHL players, but this is no where near Featured Article level (yet). Thanks again!

Objectivity[edit]

There’s a section at the end of his playing career that suggests his consideration for the national team. This addition is not referenced and seems to lack objectivity 2607:9880:10D8:70:20DD:CE7B:F8B7:BED8 (talk) 14:41, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]