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Article Evaluation

The Wikipedia page that I chose is called Being Human (North American Tv Series). As I scrolled through the page I noticed a ton of things that could be added as well as fixed. A positive to the page was that all the information on it was relevant to the article topic. Nothing on the page really distracts you from the main idea of the page, which is to inform viewers of what exactly the show is about. The article is neutral in the sense that it gives a brief summary of all the main characters in the show as well a brief 2 to 3 sentences describing recurring cast members. Due to the fact that this page is about a tv series and is also underdeveloped, there are no clear signs of bias within the information provided. Within the page there are neutral viewpoints of the characters and the production and development information of the tv series. At moments, you can see certain characters weren’t really discussed in depth as the others but that could be due to lack of interest or the person who edited the page didn’t finish. Besides that, the page looks for the most part even in the since that there was no personal feelings shown through the works. Moving on to a different topic, as I scrolled down and viewed the page I saw tons of hyperlinks and citations within the information. I clicked on several of them and they all led to the designated page that they were supposed to. The sources supported there claims because if you clicked on them they were accurate in the information they were providing. Each fact was referenced appropriately, with that being said there wasn’t really a lot of room for error since the page is underdeveloped like I said earlier in the paragraph. The links for the information given on this Wikipedia page are backed up by sources that are also linked to Wikipedia. Majority of these people referenced are known and have a decent page with information about them and their successes. All the information on the page have links but some of them date back to 2010, which is 8 years prior from today. The most recent edit to this page was done on February 3rd, 2018, so not too long ago, which means the page has been updated but not thoroughly. Lastly, as I viewed the page I saw certain things that I would add to. One being the characters section. The person who created the page did a good job of providing the gist of who the characters are but missed out on a lot of the details that would make it way more descriptive. Also, I would create a section and describe the plots of each season, that way the viewers are informed about what exactly happens throughout each season if they choose not to watch them in order. When I clicked on the talk page, there was a box saying that the page needed a plot summary because it was lacking one, so I would add that as well.CD124 (talk) 20:24, 18 March 2018 (UTC)

Intermediate Draft

Plot
"Being Human," is based on a BBC series of the same name, which features three roommates in their twenties who each try to keep a secret from the rest of the world. Aidan, who is played by Sam Witwer, is a vampire that happens to be in his 200th year of living, Josh, who is played by Sam Huntington, is a werewolf, and Sally, who is played by Meaghan Rath, is a ghost. The three try to help one another navigate the complexities of living double lives while trying to figure out their own at the same time.

Genre:
TV Shows, TV Dramas, TV Horror, TV Sci-Fi & Fantasy

Director Info

 * Toby Whithouse is an English actor, stand-up comedian and screen writer. His highest-profile work has been the creation of the BBC Three supernatural television series Being Human. He also appeared in the film version Bridget Jones Diary in 2001 as Alistair.
 * Jeremy Carver is an American television writer and producer best known for his work on The CW series Supernatural, and as the co-developer of the North American version of Being Human and television adaption of the film Frequency.
 * Anne Fricke is an American television writer and producer best known for her work on shows like Dawson's Creek, Everwood, Men in Trees and Privileged and as the co-creator of the North American version of Being Human.

Season 1
In this season, the first episode opens up with Josh and Aidan moving into a old modern style home which they eventually find out is haunted by a ghost named Sally. They soon become close friends and learn the extremity of their living situation as well as life. By the end of the season the viewers find out just exactly how Aidan came to be a vampire and the background story of Sally's death. While also getting a glimpse into Josh’s life, as he meets a woman named Nora, who he eventually grows a romantic attachment to.

Season 2
After Bishops death, Aidan has the responsibility of handling all the orphan vampires and running Boston. While also realizing his feelings for his old found love interest. During this period of chaos he is faced with trivial decisions that he must answer for, before it’s too late. In the meantime, Josh and Nora meet fellow werewolves and go on a dangerous mission to kill Ray (Josh’s Creator), while Sally fights her inner self, and meets her mother again for the first time since she died.

Season 3
Aidan resurfaces after being buried alive in a coffin and realizes everyone from his vampire family has been swept away. After figuring this out he too comes face to face with death and has to figure out how to stop it. Nora and Josh meet a young girl and debate how to handle the situation she brings while Liam tries to turn them against Aidan. While Sally, accidently runs into someone from her past and has to meet with a witch to try and fix it.

Season 4
Aidan and Nora make their new home for the moment in a trailer while trying to figure out how to turn Josh back normal. Aidan learns of a new vampire boss who he wouldn’t expect and tries to convince him otherwise, while pursuing his new-found love interest Kat. Nearing the end of the series, Sally comes to terms with her feelings and finally tells a special someone how she really feels.

Season 1

 * Episode 1- There Goes the Neighborhood 1.	A Mirror Without –Royal Wood 2.	Weighty Ghost- Wintersleep 3.	All That You Are- Econoline Crush 4.	Oisin, My Bastard Brother- The High Dials 5.	When the Sun Goes Down- Arctic Monkeys 6.	Wondering- Dirty Pretty Things
 * Episode 2- There Goes the Neighborhood (2) 1.	Bang- The Pack A.D. 2.	The Beat Stuff- Hannah Georgas 3.	Arrow- Kathryn Calder 4.	Bad Luck- Royal City 5.	Old Haunts, New Cities- Typhoon 6.	Up Past the Nursery- Suuns 7.	Do You Recall- Royal Wood 8.	You’re A Wolf- Seawolf 9.	Something Inside Of Me- The Coral 10.	 Shinsy- Catlow 11.	 Showbiz- Muse
 * Episode 3- Some Thing to Watch Over Me 1.	The Ghost In You- The Psychedelic Furs 2.	Ghost In You- Matthew Puckett 3.	Robot Command Centre- Dark Captain Light Captain 4.	Moving Pictures Silent Films- Great Lake Swimmers 5.	Mind Soul- Plains
 * Episode 4- Wouldn’t It Be Nice (If We Were Human) 1.	Seven or Eight Days- Adrian Glynn 2.	Who You Gonna Run To?- Solid Gold 3.	Tainted Love- Mojohands & Esben Just 4.	You Don’t Just Want to Break Me (You Want to Tear Me Apart)- Hawksley Workman 5.	City- Sunfields 6.	Turn Around- Justin Rutledge And Carina Round 7.	Wolves and Werewolves- The Pack A.D
 * Episode 5- The End of the World as We Knew It 1.	Dead Letter and The Infinite Yes- Wintersleep 2.	Shine- Hannah Georgas 3.	Heart to Tell- The Love Language 4.	Broadcast to the Addicted- Drakes Hotel 5.	Dead Letter & The Infinite Yes- Wintersleep 6.	Floating Way Up- T.H. White
 * Episode 6- It Takes Two to Make a Thing Go Wrong 1.	Time to Say Goodnight- Two Ton Boa 2.	Astronomers- We Are The City 3.	Perfect Fit- Clues 4.	Peace Will Come- Orillia Opry 5.	Oh Missy- Woolfy
 * Episode 7- I See Your True Colors… And That’s Why I Hate You 1.	The Boy Could Fly- Rubylux 2.	Sooner Or Later- Zaza 3.	The Doubt- Harper Blynn 4.	My Old Friend- We Are The City
 * Episode 8- Children Shouldn’t Play with Undead Things 1.	Killer of Dragons- The High Dials 2.	New Kanada- Solid Gold 3.	Iamloved- Catlow 4.	Wanna Feel It- Vibrolux 5.	Save the Day- Pacifika
 * Episode 9- I Want You Back (From the Dead) 1.	Spanish Burn- Carina Round 2.	All It Is- Kathryn Calder 3.	Party People- Winter Gloves 4.	Disappear Here- Gran Ronde 5.	Solidarity- Daniel G. Harmann & The Trouble Starts 6.	Mad World- Gary Jules With Michael Andrews 7.	Solidarity Forever- Daniel Hedberg 8.	Spanish Burn- Early Winters 9.	Rail- Reid Jamieson
 * Episode 10- Dog Eat Dog 1.	31 Years- Elliott Brood 2.	I Got The Blues- Glen Morris Ft Duane Eddy 3.	Too Hot to Handle- The Blue Notes 4.	A Teardrop from Heaven- Nolan Strong & The Diablos 5.	Two Time Loser- Joe Montgomery
 * Episode 11- Going Dutch 1.	Cold Comfort- The Fling 2.	Never Came- Sweet Apple 3.	A Joke- The Crackling
 * Episode 12- You’re the One That I Haunt 1.	The First Thing- Tom Hanson 2.	Better- Blue Shoes 3.	Old Haunts, New Cities- Typhoon
 * Episode 13- A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to Me Killing You 1.	Hooligans- Neighbors 2.	Juliet- Royal Wood 3.	Don’t Look Back In Anger- Oasis 4.	Civilian- Wye Oak

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