User:Chzz/boofar

User:RichardMathews/SSP category
I am looking for some preliminary input on the creation of one or more new categories. See the user page for the explanation of what I have in mind and the feedback I am requesting.

Seeking feedback on this new article, similar in use and fuction to the following existing WIKI articles...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Space:_1999_episodes#Message_From_Moonbase_Alpha http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Trek:_Phase_II_(fan_series)

Da Cheeze (talk) 15:39, 21 August 2010 (UTC)

User:Avibtech/Microsoft SharePoint 2010
Thanks for quick reply on my feedback request posted on August 18, 2010. Yes I agree with you. We should not encourage to create duplicate pages and content. But I have already visited the page which you have shared. This was the only page which motivated me to create new page for SharePoint 2010. That page's title in SharePoint but it is talking about SharePoint 2007, SharePoint 2010, Microsoft Search Server, and Microsoft Office SharePoint Designer. SharePoint 2007 and SharePoint 2010 are tw== User:Phearson/Asking for Privileges ==

How can I improve this essay?

Phearson (talk) 22:40, 21 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Being an essay it can just be your opinion so any comments here are obviously optional.
 * The text reads as slightly patronizing, think about how the tone can respect the reader. Perhaps the lead could give a context to who the reader is likely to be?
 * "Privileges" could do with a bit of explanation of what they are, maybe a See also list pointing to other articles such as Administrators would help if the reader wants to find more information.
 * Other topics such as mentoring/adopt a user might be helpful, links to Dispute resolution processes that users without any special rights can help with, links to related essays and possibly some inter-wiki links might be of interest.
 * Spiderman is a great photo.
 * Thanks, Fæ (talk) 08:56, 24 August 2010 (UTC)