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Articles selected
Memoirs of Carwin the Biloquist
 * This article is not concise, it is wordy and reads like cliff notes.


 * There are is no significant changes to the content itself, it's just a bunch of copy edits and formatting fixes. It seems that making it concise is a job left to me.

Das Boot
 * This article has some citations needed and needs to be reorganized.


 * Article history reveals at one point, there was a lot of fluff about characters who don't really matter to the story added by someone I presume to be up bot because their name is 2600:6c64:507f:44e3:b957:6392:a747:c74a. Doniago has since reversed this fluff. Another historical edit reveals that at one point it said that one actor broke two ribs when they fell off the bridge of the boat, but it was actually a different actor who sustained that injury, but it must be a change that went unlisted because I cannot find the author of it.

Model Articles
Raiders of the Lost Ark

Paradises Lost

Style Manuals
Manual of Style/Novels

Manual of Style/Film