User:GooglyEyedRock

Pie menu

This topic might be a good choice since other members of the Wikipedia have flagged it for having many issues (original research, need for verification, argumentative essay format, unnecessary information).

Doctor V64

This article has a massive middle section that reads like an essay. Upon a cursory glance I can see where I might make partitions to separate the large paragraph out.

Melodrama

The "Film" section is written like an essay, I can again see where I might separate certain points they made into a "Controversy of term" section or something like it.

Abuelita

This article has some recipes(!) in it and while that's great, I don't think that it really fits the encyclopedic tone Wikipedia is going for. I think either a new section could be made or it could just be removed altogether.

List of citrus soft drinks

In general, seems to be poorly written. Also, most of these listed sodas appear to be Mountain Dew clones. I just feel that this could be better arranged in a table as it isn't visually pleasing as it is.

[On a side note, I don't know if these are necessarily articles I want to edit, but the Brie and Camembert articles have "Comparison to [other cheese]" sections that were obviously written by the same person. I just like to think that there's someone with a Ph.D. in cheese lurking around on Wikipedia changing cheese articles to reflect their minute (yet apparently very critical) differences. As a fellow cheese-enjoyer, I have no desire to overwrite their effort.] Reference Articles:

Dolphin (emulator) (for Doctor V64)

Windows Push Notification Service (for Pie Menu)

Social thriller (for Melodrama)

Edit History:

Doctor V64: I didn’t see many tangible edits, but there was a lot of bickering in the Talk section. Additionally, there was some controversy over whether an image used was fair use or not. But again, that kind of boiled down to a lot of bickering in the comments section.

Melodrama: There are over 500 pages of edits, so, respectfully, I didn’t look through all of them. I did however see a lot of the same sections just sticking over time, with a majority of edits being quality/grammar/diction related.

Pie Menu: Almost all of the edits were just people adding on games to the Notable Implementations page. Nothing really substantial.