User talk:Atsang99

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Hello, Atsang99, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hello!
Hi Ashley! I'm Anne. I hope you're enjoying your time in PJHC 371! I think it's awesome that you're interested in art and social justice and bridging those interests through your extracurricular activities! AMRara (talk) 21:43, 5 September 2019 (UTC)

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Hi Ashley! It's Sophie. Thanks so much for leading both of our discussions this week. Also super cool to find out you're involved in Camp Kesem and PAIR :) See you next class! SSchlhmr (talk) 22:24, 5 September 2019 (UTC)

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Refugee health in the United States
Hello. I notice the new section Healthcare Barriers you added to Refugee health in the United States. The subsection names fall afoul of MOS:NOBACKREF; please remove the word barriers from the subsections (and please include the words " " in your edit summary). Mathglot (talk) 10:41, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Reply
I made some copy edits to some of your additions, fixing section header capitalization (it should use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization) and removing the spaces between references and punctuation.

In places where back-to-back sentences that are supported by the same source, you only need to use the reference at the end of the block of sentences (as long as they are in the same paragraph). But that's not an absolute requirement. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:25, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review for Refugee Children
Hello! I really liked how you made the article very accessible to everyone regardless of their education level. Additionally, I like how you included sources from various doctors/scholars. Furthermore, the topic you decided to work on is very valuable. There is not much attention to refugee children once they are in school. The portions of the article did a good job at shedding light on the hardships they face. The changes I recommend are three. One as of now the the education section is the largest in the article. I recommend adding more to other parts of the article to balance it out. Or not adding more to his section. Second is there are sentences that come across as "people should do this" and cause the article to loose its neutrality. I would recommend going back to the article and changing the sentences. Finally, the third recommendation is more up in the air. Adding more perspectives. What are some push back that government might have to assisting refugee children. This might contribute to the neutrality of the article. Overall, I think fixing the neutrality of the article is the most important. Great work! EliGamez (talk) 08:12, 29 March 2020 (UTC)