User talk:Bcarlsen

hello! Chasearave (talk) 17:05, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

Professor Review
5a. So far, you've added 133 words, which means you'll need to add another 117 words to meet the 350-word minimum. Your plans to add more information about what's taught in the academy across academies will surely have enough information to meet the minimum word count.

5b. Your revisions so far focus on the topic and do not go into unnecessary detail.

5c. Your revisions so far represent viewpoints fairly and without bias.

5d. Your revisions so far are accurately referenced.

5e. Your revisions so far do not include original research. However, you'll have to be careful when adding information about similarities and differences across academies. You'll need to find sources that already do the comparisons rather than doing the research yourself.

5f. Your revisions meet this criteria. There are a few minor grammatical errors. If you copy the revisions into a Word document, you'll see where the problems are.

5g. The article and your revisions flow well.

5h. Your revisions comply with style guidelines.

5i. Your revisions are not yet Wikilinked. As you add more information, be sure to link to other relevant Wikipedia articles. You might look at the descriptions of the academies in other states to get ideas about where/what to Wikilink.

5j. You have added an image. I noticed that it's for the New York MTA Police Department, but New York isn't one of the states covered in the article. I'd suggest either adding a section on New York and putting the picture near that section, or finding a picture related to one of the states already covered.

Profmwilliams (talk) 19:24, 3 April 2015 (UTC)