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Your GA nomination of Independence Day (India)
The article Independence Day (India) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Independence Day (India) for comments about the article. Well done!  Tito Dutta  ✉  17:28, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

Independence Day (India) badge
Awarding this for your work on Independence Day (India), which was the special collaboration of the month for taking upto GA level under WikiProject India.



Vande Mataram! B Positive (talk)   18:12, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

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–  Tito Dutta  ✉  12:37, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Also see this. this is continuing.. -- Tito Dutta  ✉  14:16, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, they have quoted the best part. I also checked it before they told– See Commons:Commons:L Uploads of non-U.S. works are normally allowed only if the work is either in the public domain or covered by a valid free license in both the U.S. and the country of origin of the work. . But, I guess there are several loopholes here. If PD-Old, PD-1923 is applicable in a file, it'll be certainly PD-India too. So, what is the importance of PD-India template? Also, did you notice, the main work from where you cropped 1947 15 August Red Fort image was uploaded by a Commons admin? Also PD-India-URAA may help here. That's all I have to share now! -- Tito Dutta  ✉  14:41, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I mean this Commons:Template:PD-India-URAA, this might be helpful, also can you please check all similar licenses? For slow net I am facing huge problem to browse! -- Tito Dutta  ✉  14:46, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Please make a list of all the relevant licenses. Also see the newest posts here -- Tito Dutta  ✉  01:40, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

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Re: Current
Ei elo! -- Tito Dutta  ✉  15:05, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Raat 8:40:10 ekhon. Kal amar ek porichita markin mohila hothat kore jighyesh kore boshlem je– "Are you near the area that experienced the power outage yesterday?"– bhabchhilam ami kon shok e power outage er dhare kachhe thakbo. Prosno ta bodh hoy agam chhilo.
 * Ei Harvard style reference er subidha ta ki? Ami aaj prothom Sita Mata article e koyekta Harvnb try korlam, mone hochhe cite book e better, direct click kore boi er page dekha jay, harvnb e to cover page khole (ei jonyei bodh hoy Swami Ji r GA reviewer bolcehhilo, uni reference check korte parchhen na)! -- Tito Dutta  ✉  15:14, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Guys, there are other people who watch your talk page as well :P B Positive (talk)   15:46, 31 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I usually refrain from using non-English language apart from short phrases. for the convenience of others I am doing a gist of our conversation above—I asked Tito if his area was affected by the power outage. he is, indeed. Then he questioned the user-friendliness of Harvnb reference style which he is trying in Sita article. (I have left the humor and irony of his message out from the translation-- that is only for Bengalis!).--Dwaipayan (talk) 16:41, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

Portal:India/Quiz
Hi Dwaipayanc, you gave the last correct answer here and now its your turn to ask the question.Go ahead and ask a tough one!!!---Ayanosh (talk) 07:39, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

Re: Pi answer!
Excellent! -- Tito Dutta  ✉  15:17, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

Re: Vivekananda
New reply in my talk page! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  03:10, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Ami page ta te prochur kaaj korchhi Swami Vivekananda. Kemon hochche? --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  03:12, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'll try to work on these sections. Please give your feedback on Commons Vivekananda page. Ei muhurte amader ek bondhu ke khunje paowa jachche na. Je kina proti mashe 10 hajar, 11 hajar kore edit korto (mane proti din 300 ta kore), she goto 12 din edit e kore ni! Khanek chintito ei bishoye! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  03:27, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

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Re: Chatrak
To respect your request, I have made some changes, but, since some portions of this film badly clash with my personal belief and ideology, I don't think I'll feel comfortable to edit in this article. The article should be named Chatrak (film), per film poster and film certificate. In Telegraph there are some good content on it! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  03:18, 3 August 2012 (UTC)

FAC
Hi Dwaipayan, Sorry, I somehow did not notice your post on my talk page, buried as it quickly became by other posts. Glad to hear the article is at FAC. Will take a look at it and provide feedback. Fowler&amp;fowler «Talk»  12:31, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi there, I did take a look at the article. There are two issues with it.  Its scope is not clearly delineated, and it is too short for an FA.
 * I feel that the "Independence day" article should mainly be about the day, about the history of the day (i.e. how the day came to be picked), about how the day is celebrated in different parts of the country, and about customs around those celebrations that have taken root during the last 60 years, not about the history of the independence movement. Please see Independence Day (United States).  The "background" section there is chiefly about how July 4 came to be picked for the declaration.
 * The article is too short for an FA. It needs to be developed more.  That will take time.  In any case, if the goal was for it to become an FA by August 15, that is unlikely to happen, as the FAC process for successful FAs is usually long drawn out.  If you'd like I can say these things on the FAC page itself, but I thought I'd leave my two cents here first.  Regards,  Fowler&amp;fowler  «Talk»  11:14, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

Requested move
I have been preparing a "requested move". (ya, it sounds funny, but, sometimes I need lots of preparation before requesting a move.) I have not posted it still, please give me initial comments

This is one of the most sensitive requested move I have ever done (read disclaimer below). And I think some people will discard the request at once. But, still I request to read my rationales below at least: I can present few more comments where scholars and critics have felt the novel is greater than the film. Disclaimer: I can understand this may start a controversy which I'll try my best to avoid. Personally I do not have any opinion about this comment of Azad or any negative comment made on Ray's film. In search of perfection, --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  18:58, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Requested move Pather Panchali → Pather Panchali (film)
 * Both the novel and the film have same title. The novel was published in 1929 and the film released in 1955.
 * There have been lots of debates over the question– which is more valuable as an art work– the film or the novel! Bangladeshi author and scholar Humayun Azad told– if Satyajit Ray (film director) is regarded as pride of India Bharat Ratna, then Bibhutibhushan Bandopadhyay (novelist) is definitely pride of world, pride of civilisation, but unfortunately no one knows superior Bibhutibhushan, but everyone knows inferior Ray. In comparison to the standard of the novel, the film is miserable.... Since this is a sensitive comment, I'll quote the original Bengali lines too– সত্যজিৎ যদি ভারতরত্ন হন, তবে বিভূতিভূষণ বিশ্বরত্ন, সভ্যতারত্ন, কিন্তু অসভ্য প্রচারের যুগে মহৎ বিভূতিভূষণ-কে পৃথিবী কেন ভারত-ও চেনে না, চেনে গৌণ সত্যজিৎ কে৷ বিভূতিভূষণের পথের পাঁচালির পাশে সত্যজিৎ-এর চলচ্চিত্র-টি খুব-ই শোচনীয় বস্তু৷ ওটি তৈরী না হলেও ক্ষতি ছিলো না, কিন্তু বিভূতিভূষণ যদি পথের পাঁচালি না লিখতেন ক্ষতি হতো সভ্যতার৷
 * Suggestion: The only thing I want to highlight–  both the novel and the film are considered as classics, so, I suggest to make this title Pather Panchali a disambiguation page with link to 1) Pather Panchali (film) 2) Pather Panchali (novel).

Re:Mushrooms dyk review
That's very generous of you - once you've done one, just note it on the nomination page and the article will be ready to go once more. Regards, Miyagawa   (talk)  13:26, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

Re: PD-India image
I have re-added those images in the article, as decision was "keep"! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  18:02, 4 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes confusing! But, I have not closed the decision. I have bookmarked the link for future preference. Anyway, I don't think we should be worried now, even they get deleted from Commons after reassessment, we can keep those image locally! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  18:13, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

Talkback
25 CENTS VICTORIOUS <sup style="color:black;">☣  20:14, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

you might have already noticed
today's FA is smaller in length than Independence Day (India)--sarvajna (talk) 09:02, 5 August 2012 (UTC)

You got mail
I have shared a book with you which most probably you have got in mail. Another Bangladeshi writer's book. But, this writer is not as famous as Zafar Iqbal or Humayun Ahmed. Don't read the book page by page. Start from any page. Best thing will be if you start reading from page 30 or 50 or so. This is mainly written for children. But, you'll be surprised to find the amount of studies the writer has shown in this book! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  02:13, 5 August 2012 (UTC)

Did you know?
Did you know–
 * Benefits
 * Those files are being saved in your Google Drive account automatically. You can group in folders in your Google drive account.
 * You can share those files directly from your Google Drive account, you don’t need to re-upload files to share with others. (but don't share the link in public places like Facebook, Google Plus)
 * There is no advertisement, trap ads, pop-up ads, misleading/confusing download links there.
 * There is no limit or restriction of download count or parallel download.
 * People can choose their own file type and convert the file before downloading.
 * The book can be read online too.


 * Problem
 * There is no clear download link in the file sometimes, the best way is to tell someone that click on File→ Download! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  17:31, 6 August 2012 (UTC)

Importance marker
I did not clarify the function of importance markers in India Independence Day GA review. In another review I have started, I have tried to clarify the function of importance markers! And in this review I have removed "Choose a review type" completely! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  09:04, 7 August 2012 (UTC)

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Rameswaram ref format!
Please have a look at the question related to ref format. I think is has some problem. Please add your view! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  04:53, 8 August 2012 (UTC)

Independence Day FAC
Hi. Since the issue about images has been resolved at commons and the images are back in the article, is it fine to ping the ones who started off commenting on the FAC page? Considering our goal, I think we should approach them to resume the review. <font color="DeepPink">B <font color="MediumSlateBlue">Positive <font color="ForestGreen">(talk)   15:26, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi! In any case, getting the article to FA status within 15 August is 99% impossible. I think we better wait and watch for other reviewers coming spontaneously, at least for now. We have our new goal now: to get it featured on the main page on 15 august 2013 :) Regards.--Dwaipayan (talk) 17:24, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Alright! So we focus on further improving the article to the best of the abilities now. :-) Happy Editing! :-) <font color="DeepPink">B <font color="MediumSlateBlue">Positive <font color="ForestGreen">(talk)   20:11, 8 August 2012 (UTC)

DYK for Mushrooms (film)
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Bhagavad Gita (GAR)
I have made changes to the prose as per your suggestions. It looks like you've reviewed the article up to the overview of chapters. If possible, please continue your review from there, whenever you find the time for it. Regards. CorrectKnowledge (talk) 16:46, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Can I suggest a few changes to your recent edits:
 * essence of oneself → essence of self (as it represents individual consciousness not the Self or Atman)
 * In "Bhagavad Gita also emphasises", you removed "also". It is necessary because the Gita upholds both Upanishadic monism and dualism/theism.
 * The citation is not needed as the next citation (Fowler|2012|page=xliii-iv) covers all the previous sentences in the section.
 * I can go ahead and make the changes if you agree. CorrectKnowledge (talk) 15:24, 9 August 2012 (UTC)

Talkback
<font color="DeepPink">B <font color="MediumSlateBlue">Positive <font color="ForestGreen">(talk)   03:45, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Article
Hello, I just wanted to introduce myself and let you know I am glad to be reviewing the article Article you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 12 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  17:49, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

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Dwitiyo Manob
Can you please help in this article Dwitiyo Manob, specially the synopsis section? --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  08:21, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
 * No visible reference available. And the reference added is not first class third party source! I have also created few more articles in last 2 days Iti Srikanta, Dwando, Tanima Sen and few more. First two may have some DYK component --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  03:18, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Race is one PD India
Race is on– once again– this time in Admin's noticeboard– Commons:Commons:Administrators'_noticeboard --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  11:50, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

review page
Some points you had mentioned have been questioned back which needs your (quick?) attention! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  17:37, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

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Uttar Pradesh
Hey, i'm back.That was just a namesake I.V we're told to enjoy, nothing else.But anyways lets concentrate on wiki work.One of user User talk:Awadhi adding materials which are already written.I've properly suggest him but he's not even want to understand what i'm trying to say.The whole discussion can be seen here.I've wasted lot of time to wrote two article viz. Uttar Pradesh and Allahabad for now i'm working on references(Since yoou are aware of it).If he doesnt stop his poor activities, i'm sure the article never gonna have FA or GA status in future.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS <sup style="color:black;">☣  14:14, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

Satyajit Ray
Don't you think the article requires an FA review as it was passed way back in 2006? Secret of success (talk) 15:46, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

Talkback
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Re:Nilgiri Malabar Battalion
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Synopsis please
Could you please complete the synopsis here? I am dying with headache with 13–14 new articles in last 3 days. Still my hand is full with.. to be created... Nabanna play, and some more plays, Asoka cinema hall, Elite Cinema Hall, Menoka Cinema Hall (most probably I'll create it, if I get good references). Reference collection for Deshapriya Park, Mahanirban Math.. etc.... It'll be great if you can complete the synopsis portion here!--<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  19:21, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Read it here. Congrats, you are only Bengali who does not remember Birpurush..
 * Could you please comment on naming conventions of Birpurush (play), Nabanna (play)– are these names okay? Quick comments will be helpful so that I need to move a bunch of articles a month later!
 * I have not seen Icche! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  19:40, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
 * That is not a huge deal, it can be done bu changing first word of the lead's format or by adding . Could you please help to take Nabanna to DYK by expanding (I can totally help in expanding). This is a great play depicting Bengali famine of 1943 of which 2 million died of starvation. In our school syllabus there was a portion of this play "Anna chai, Pran Chai"!
 * That is not a huge deal, it can be done bu changing first word of the lead's format or by adding . Could you please help to take Nabanna to DYK by expanding (I can totally help in expanding). This is a great play depicting Bengali famine of 1943 of which 2 million died of starvation. In our school syllabus there was a portion of this play "Anna chai, Pran Chai"!

If you are DYK fan, you can try out my articles, I never try DYK, for example– If you want I can expand the articles you need (though it is very difficult to expand Calcutta Cinema Halls article)
 * Rabindranath Tagore directed Natir Puja in New Empire Cinema (Kolkata)
 * Netaji Subhas Chandra Bose came to Roxy Cinema (Kolkata) to watch Ashok Kumar-starre Kismat etc

Back to DYK help related to Nabanna! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  21:07, 22 August 2012 (UTC)

speedy deletion of Agroturystyka dom z bali
Just letting you know have deleted the page, but not for the reason you specified. It was not " patent nonsense," it was written in Polish. Material not in English is specifically exempted from from speedy deletion under the criterion you used, as is noted right in the template you used to nominate it. If you see material that is not in English, websites such as What language is this? and Google translate can help you sort out what is really going on. As it turns out in this case it was a thinly veiled advertisement for a tourist attraction of dubious notability, so I have deleted it for those reasons, but if it was a proper article on an encyclopedic subject it should be listed at pages needing translation as opposed to being speedy deleted. Thanks for your time. Beeblebrox (talk) 17:38, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

on an unrelated note
This talk page is becoming very long. Please consider archiving. Beeblebrox (talk) 17:38, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/J._A._K._Tareen
Hi

I only wrote the Article about Tareen, I don't have any connection with Tareen. I have not seen him. Even, he may not know about this article. I am currently in Germany. This is my first article/biography, may be there are few mistakes. I would like to improve this article. I want request you to remove the massage about neutral point of view. I hope with your help I can improve the article better soon. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pondiunivc (talk • contribs) 11:14, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/J._A._K._Tareen
Hello,

Thank you very much. I happy about your faith,. I am still working on to improve the article. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pondiunivc (talk • contribs) 08:22, 25 August 2012 (UTC)

Talkback
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Talkback on 23 August 2012
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Need help from you!
Thank you for the offering. We need help on the article NML Cygni. The inaccessible source is the full view of this source. Thank you so much. <font style="text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.3em 0.2em">···V ani s che nu「m/Talk」 22:43, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
 * It is to verify these claims,
 * That star (NML Cygni) is 1650 times bigger than the Sun
 * That star is the largest star currently known.
 * Thank you once again for helping us.<font style="text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.3em 0.2em">···V ani s che nu「m/Talk」 22:48, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
 * If it looses DYK opportunity, then we have no hurry to source it that it is the largest star! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  22:57, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

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Template:Did you know nominations/NML Cygni. But references are always needed. Wishes.<font style="text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.3em 0.2em">···V ani s che nu「m/Talk」 01:56, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

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Both Paoli Dam and Parno Mitra (articles) are giving a lot of headaches recently! You have new message here! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  20:25, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

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Hi, sorry for the delay in replying. Here are my thoughts about the entire Security section:


 * "In anticipation of terrorist attacks...": the section starts with a general claim, i.e. not specific to any particular year or event. Hence, the source(s) we use must also support such a broad claim.


 * However, I think you haven't found such a source; your present ones are mainly news reports that talk about specific incidents relevant to that year's i-day alone. For eg, this 2002 source talks of fundamentalists concerns and hence "12,000 people are now deployed". IMO, this source, even in conjuction with similar sources from 2005, 09 and 12 etc, and cannot be used to support the general claim of the first sentence.


 * Instead, I suggest you rewrite the section by starting with an uncited general sentence and then follow up with specific incidents. For eg: "In 1950, Nagas threatened to boycott i-day", "In 1991, ULFA caused trouble", "In 2002, 12,000 troops were deployed"... Hopefully you can give a broad idea of the security concerns by pointing specific examples.


 * This will also address my worry that the section is currently a little vague—to a non-Indian reader who lacks context, it could appear as though the likes of LeT and ULFA having been terrorising us ever since Independence. :)

Another thing, I think the article needs a bit about the Swarna Jayanti (golden jubilee) in 1997 (or 1996? Not sure how to count—does it mean the 50th i-day or the 50th anniversary of i-day?). I think the govt announced a bunch of schemes etc. Maybe a sub-section of Celebration?—indopug (talk) 13:04, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "which and how many years to mention" and "inclusion criteria": there doesn't need to be an objective, hard-and-fast rule. I guess we try to give an example or two from the various decades and the relevant groups (Islamists, NE separatists and Maoists)? Yeah, the decades idea is a good one.—indopug (talk) 14:01, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

Thanks
Hey...! Thanks for all the important help of copy editing on 59th National Film Awards. §§AnimeshKulkarni (talk) 18:46, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I appreciate your edits on the article. After generating so much heat, do you think going for PR2 would be an appropriate step? or shall we continue with this and re-nominate for GOCE and then apply for FL again in some time? - <span style="font:italic bold 12px/30px Georgia, serif"><font color="#808080">Vivvt &bull;&#32; (<font color="#000000">Talk ) 19:23, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Nomination is now added to "Failed log". I have restored GOCE request which Animesh had withdrawn couple of days back. I'm not sure about how to deal with the copy-vio issue. Official catalogue is already part of references from where everything is referenced. As per FLC comments, 100% copy-paste not allowed, so even if we reference each of them, it wouldn't answer the basic concern of copy-paste. Do we have any copy-vio expert in WP:INCINE? - <span style="font:italic bold 12px/30px Georgia, serif"><font color="#808080">Vivvt &bull;&#32; (<font color="#000000">Talk ) 02:57, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Spaceman deals with a lot of copyvio issues. Have asked him. §§AnimeshKulkarni (talk) 04:38, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, he could be a good adviser.--Dwaipayan (talk) 04:41, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

Talkback on 23 August 2012
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 * Please keep Mushrooms (film) in watchlist. Most probably you can remember, I wished not to participate in that article, now I am topmost primary contributor there. Keep an eye on that 122.163 IP address edits! I'll slow down reverting else I may get a warning for edit warring! --<span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#ED791A 0em 0em 0.8em,#F55220 -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,#1D6B00 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;"> Tito Dutta  ✉  03:44, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

NML Cygni on DYK Main Page
It is there on the Main Page today. Many thanks for your invaluable help! <font style="text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.3em 0.2em">···V ani s che nu「m/Talk」 08:41, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

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Do you have access to this page. Wishes.<font style="text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.3em 0.2em">···V ani s che nu「m/Talk」 17:21, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
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 * I Got a Mail. :) Thank you so much. That source will help a lot.<font style="text-shadow:gray 0.2em 0.3em 0.2em">···V ani s che nu「m/Talk」 14:54, 4 September 2012 (UTC)