User talk:E9P2

Hey there! I"m going to figure out who you are by how red your face is getting right now. Hakeleh (talk) 19:30, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

HERE ARE MY TWO EVALUATIONS FOR MY TWO GIVEN ARTICLES

Gamete - This article contains the ideas of all the information that should be present within the article, but it is lacking in information to back up those ideas, as well as correlations between this article and other articles that involve gametes. Also, the fact that plants are the only ones named and told to have gametes as well shows that there is more information needed in letting others know that gametes are not exclusive to just humans and plants, but other eukaryotic organisms. On the talk page, there is a list of people who have shared some ideas, but there has been one that has pointed out the missing information I specified earlier. The last modification was made sometime in August, but the page still requires a lot of work.

Morula - This article contains information that should be divided into different sections. Also, there is definitely not much done here in terms of actual information. I cannot really see the relationship between this stage in embryonic development with the other two before and after it. One thing that I would do right away is give some background information on embryonic development as a whole, keeping in mind that this should only focus on morula. Second, I would make sure to have important information posted on the user page and not on the talk page because unless you are a wiki expert, you won't be able to find it that easily. Also, more information on the processes involved in getting to the morula stage in development is necessary in order to understand the entire thing as a whole. The last modification was made sometime in September, but the page still requires a lot of work.

E9P2 (talk) 01:14, 7 October 2013 (UTC)