User talk:Ennis Architect

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Hello, Ennis Architect, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hey it's Sanchu from PJHC! I'm just writing to introduce myself, and to say that I think that your interests in sustainable urbanism and your architect perspective are super interesting. Sraghuvir (talk) 21:13, 5 September 2019 (UTC)Sraghuvir

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Nice work on that article! I made a few copy-edits, but overall it looks good. A few things you could still improve Though the lead is too short, the Gentrification of San Francisco might be a useful model to work from.
 * The article has more of an introduction than a lead section. It should start with a brief statements of what the article is about, something like The gentrification of Mexico City involves/entails/has been... - something along those lines that leaves the reader with some useful knowledge about the topic even if they don't read beyond the first sentence (as happens far too often). The rest of the lead should summarise all the major points of the article.
 * You could add some more links to other Wikipedia articles in the body of the article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:46, 19 November 2019 (UTC)