User talk:Fallszn

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Zackary Drucker
Minor revisions needed. You have chosen and interesting filmmaker and have found high-quality sources. When you move your work to mainspace, make sure not to overwrite too much of the existing text on Drucker’s page. Before moving your work to mainspace, I recommend the following revisions: Chronophoto (talk) 13:11, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Refer to the artist as “Drucker” not “Zackary” throughout.
 * Change “Love Life” heading to “Personal Life.” Change “Exhibitions, film festivals, performances” to “Exhibitions and Performances.”
 * Add more footnotes to “Early Life” and “Filmography” (and anywhere you are making a claim that is not general knowledge).
 * When you write about what Drucker thinks, preface by saying where you are getting this information: “In a 2014 interview, Drucker stated…”
 * When you are communicating a scholarly argument (e.g. Nawracaj on Drucker’s performance art and Morse on Drucker’s work in Transparent) make sure to preface it by introducing the scholar. For example, “Media scholar Nicole Morse argues that Drucker’s use of double casting…” or “Performance artist Johnny forever Nawracaj writes that Drucker’s performances elicits…”
 * When describing art shows or performances that happened in the past, write about them in the past tense.
 * Fix small grammatical errors: “who’s” -> “whose”; What does “2008-13” mean under “Exhibitions”?