User talk:Gduffy25



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Grammar, order, and phrasing clean up
At Sustainable diet I see that you did multiple changes to phrasing that in my opinion were no great improvement on what existed before. Your request for a similar massive makeover at a protected article was denied. I suggest you consider focusing on adding content with refs, substituting for weak refs, etc. rather than doing style makeovers for articles that have been around for a long time, phrasing acceptable by editors who focused on other types of improvements. David notMD (talk) 10:37, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Reference shortcut
For science journal references, there is a shortcut if you have a PMID number. Open https://tools.wmflabs.org/citation-template-filling/cgi-bin/index.cgi and enter the PMID number. This generates the ref content that goes inside the ref brackets. I used it to upgrade the Johnston ref you added. David notMD (talk) 10:49, 16 February 2023 (UTC)