User talk:IZRozin22

Hi i'm Ilana Rozin a Psychology major. I am taking a history and theory of psychology class

Hi Ilana, here's my feedback on your article choices.

Criminal Psychology <-- it's a pretty broad topic, but the page does need improvement, so go for it if you're into it.

Peer Review Shenandoah University
The article looked pretty slim before you worked on it. You seemed to add a lot and wrote very well. During this time I noticed you were the only one working on this article and no one has deleted any of your information yet, I don't blame them. The only issue with your work were little grammatical errors. The article looks great the information seemed really accurate. The only other issue with your edit was I think your source was a primary source and not a secondary source. I don't see why you can't use primary sources. If thats where you got your information from, you collected some good information and it seemed accurate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wjackson10 (talk • contribs) 15:30, 19 March 2013 (UTC)

I like that you deleted the section about the fastest development occurring. I was kind of nervous to delete things other people put, but I definitely think it was a positive reduction of the article because it was just too wordy and didn’t really make a clear point. The entire section of applied criminal psychology was definitely a nice addition to the article; it offers a different view of things. I liked the majority of your information; I just think that some of your edits could have more informative. Adding information about the X-files is interesting but would that really be put into an encyclopedia article? I have noticed it in other articles but I just think it isn’t really necessary. The only negative thing I have to say about your edits is the issue of your references. I had a lot of trouble figuring out which references you used and if they were even secondary sources. For the applied criminal psychology portion, there is no reference at all. I just think you should go back through and actually link your references to the correct information that you added. Vmathews102 (talk) 00:41, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

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