User talk:I dream of horses/2020/July

A message from Bestinshow1917
Hello I dream of horses, I've made reference additions per last comment you've made on June 22nd in regards to: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Willy_Cahill Please let me know if it is sufficient now for the page to be published. Thank you!

Bestinshow1917 (talk) 16:53, 2 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , looks like you've already submitted the draft. --I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 04:08, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

Submitting my draft for the article Andrew Stephenson (writer)
Hi I Dream if Horses, I just submitted my draft of Andrew Stephenson (writer) with all the citations I could find and add, I hope you approve it.

-Sincerely, MordantFan (talk) 04:17, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , No. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 04:19, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

....sorry MordantFan (talk) 04:20, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , aw, it's fine. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 04:26, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

Request on 20:35:44, 6 July 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Lecturee
Firstly, i need to edit some repetitions and a typo or two. The instructions say to click on the 'edit' button at the top of the page...but where? I see no edit button. Secondly, I don't understand the sentence: 'Has severe formatting issues, particularly surrounding the references, that would burden the community if the draft were accepted". i know what formatting is, but don't understand how to fix this. List publications without numbering them, possibly. Ouch. In third place, I need to add footnotes...but much of the personal information is not published, so i don't know how to do this. Professor Prickett told me these things and other people verified them, but it was all done verbally. Lecturee (talk) 20:35, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , basically, lack of section headers, but more importantly, lack of formatting with the references. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 18:39, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Herbert E Kaufman page submission
Thank you for the review/revision I am new to Wikipeadia submissions but I tried to properly format my "Herbert E Kaufman" submission. I could not tell if there is anything further that I need to do. I am very pleased with the page. I can not thank you enough for your help.

SVKMAN Svkman (talk) 12:46, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , you're welcome. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 18:46, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

A message from User:Tarapchak1966
I am not a writer, but I submitted an article for Michael Robert Phillips. Can you edit it to Wikipedia's requirement? Do you charge? If so how much please? Also, if you do not offer this service, where can I get the article updated to ensure acceptance?

Best regards, Joe

Tarapchak1966 (talk) 18:44, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia has such strict guidelines in regards to paid editing, that it's simply easier to not do it. I don't offer that service. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 18:48, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

A message from Gorkelobb
Hello, you rejected my article about Anthony Brennan, III and about the incident he caused. I cited a dozen mainstream media articles entirely about the incident, him and the fallout. Before he was arrested, both the Maryland Attorney General and the Mayor of DC commented, appealing to the public for information. After he was arrested, media reported that he had attempted to conceal his crime; that he was fired; and that 20 people showed up to his house to protest. Before he was arrested, two men were mistakenly identified as him, doxxed and harassed; I cited 4 articles on this aspect, that also covered the original incident.

What more is required to meet your minimum standards for notability? I cited a dozen independent credible sources entirely focused on the subject; how many more are required? Gorkelobb (talk) 01:56, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , you should probably read over the page about biographies of living people involved in one event; typically, such people aren't really notable. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 06:23, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

A message from Deema J Itani
Hello,

Hope you are doing alright, Thank you for taking the time to review my article.

I Have submitted an edit a while ago and I would like to know if it is being reviewed and reconsidered.

Thank you so much for your help.

Deema J Itani (talk) 10:52, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , no, you'd have to resubmit before your draft gets reviewed. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 04:17, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

Vandalism
What does moderate level of vandalism mean?! Crazykids43 (talk) 16:57, 10 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , it means there's an average level of vandalism, or malicious edits. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 03:14, 11 July 2020 (UTC) (fixed ping at 03:17, 11 July 2020 (UTC))

English Opening
I have reverted your revert of my edit on the English Opening because the content I deleted was simply a duplicate of the Panov-Botvinnik Attack section in the Caro–Kann Defence article that I added earlier today. In the process, you deleted edits I made to the article a few weeks ago. 73.168.5.183 (talk) 13:18, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Might want to use edit summaries for such a large deletion for now on. --I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 13:19, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

Michael Robert's Phillip's article
What precisely do I need to revise please? Without knowing, I will be shooting in the dark and it will be a lot of back and forth. Should I revise what I have started or can you provide a template? Best regards, Joe Tarapchak1966 (talk) 19:59, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , honestly, it's possible that Phillips isn't qualified for a Wikipedia article at the moment; if you want to try anyway, then you're going to need find multiple, independent, reliable sources that significantly mention him. You can read more about sourcing here and here. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 06:55, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

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A message from User:Tarapchak1966
The article for Michael Roberts Phillips is an external article to be found on this existing page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyde_Park_Academy_High_School#Notable_alumni

Does this make my article usable? Please respond using specific direction. Best regards, Joe Tarapchak

Tarapchak1966 (talk) 20:04, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , Wikipedia cannot be used to cite other Wikipedia articles. --I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 00:05, 23 July 2020 (UTC)

A message from Akinloye Israel O
Hello There

Greetings to you and thanks for going through my proposed article to be published.

I am interested in bringing to limelight successful inidividual who are making success in businesss at thier own space that's why i took Priya Kapur as a study and was also able to interview her to get some informations from here.

I am new to writing an acceptable content on wikipidia and From your comment on my just submitted contect "Has issues with formatting and neutrality.", can you be of help to get my formatting accurately

Akinloye Israel O (talk) 23:51, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , I've replied to your email. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 00:05, 23 July 2020 (UTC)

A message from Passenger19
Hi there! Thanks for your help in reviewing my article draft. I've added a few more sources to the page "Richard Brown TV and Film Producer", let me know if they are sufficient. Thanks again! Passenger19 (talk) 18:56, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , the number of sources have certainly improved. These sources: https://deadline.com/2018/01/hulu-nabs-catch-22-limited-series-starring-george-clooney-anonymous-content-par-tv-1202223557/ and https://deadline.com/2019/06/fremantle-richard-brown-1202626559/ are particularly good, since they significantly mention Brown. I'll link to a summary of what makes a good reliable reference here. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 20:30, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

Request on 20:35:44, 6 July 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Lecturee
Firstly, i need to edit some repetitions and a typo or two. The instructions say to click on the 'edit' button at the top of the page...but where? I see no edit button. Secondly, I don't understand the sentence: 'Has severe formatting issues, particularly surrounding the references, that would burden the community if the draft were accepted". i know what formatting is, but don't understand how to fix this. List publications without numbering them, possibly. Ouch. In third place, I need to add footnotes...but much of the personal information is not published, so i don't know how to do this. Professor Prickett told me these things and other people verified them, but it was all done verbally. Lecturee (talk) 20:35, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , basically, lack of section headers, but more importantly, lack of formatting with the references. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 18:39, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Herbert E Kaufman page submission
Thank you for the review/revision I am new to Wikipeadia submissions but I tried to properly format my "Herbert E Kaufman" submission. I could not tell if there is anything further that I need to do. I am very pleased with the page. I can not thank you enough for your help.

SVKMAN Svkman (talk) 12:46, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , you're welcome. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 18:46, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

A message from User:Tarapchak1966
I am not a writer, but I submitted an article for Michael Robert Phillips. Can you edit it to Wikipedia's requirement? Do you charge? If so how much please? Also, if you do not offer this service, where can I get the article updated to ensure acceptance?

Best regards, Joe

Tarapchak1966 (talk) 18:44, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia has such strict guidelines in regards to paid editing, that it's simply easier to not do it. I don't offer that service. I dream of horses (talk page) (Contribs) Remember to notify me after replying off my talk page. 18:48, 7 July 2020 (UTC)