User talk:Jmmonty16

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Plan For Improvement- Cowboy Hat
Howdy! My name is jmmonty16 and I am in Technical Editing Spring 2019 class. My goal is to edit to the best of my ability the quality of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cowboy_hat Cowboy Hat article. Here is my outline for the mission.

Change the Format – Variations – 1800s – 1900s – Modern Day – Stores
 * Introduction
 * History
 * Design
 * Style
 * Size
 * Manufactures
 * Professional Use

Changes per Section- Cowboy Hat https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cowboy_hat#Footnotes

 * 1) 1. Introduction
 * condense the paragraphs
 * make it more detailed, it is way too broad
 * take out the fluff, or extra information that shouldn't be in introduction
 * No opinions
 * Fix the Gap that comes after the introduction before the section "Design"

La Croix edits
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jmmonty16/sandbox

this is the link to my sandbox highlighting my edits from the La Croix page!