User talk:Johannes Maximilian

Request on 07:33:29, 9 June 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by Kavrigo
Dear Johannes, you previously reviewed an article I submitted to Wikipedia. Thank you for your feedback on this. I have been trying to understand what I need to do to improve the article but I am getting stuck on the measures I need to take to have it published on Wikipedia. I wondered if you could be a bit more specific in your feedback please? I have checked the in-line citation, footnote and referencing for beginners guides but I don't fully understand what I need to do. Any help you can give me would be much appreciated. With many thanks, Kerry-Ann

Kavrigo (talk) 07:33, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Johannes Drerup
Hi @Johannes Maximilian, Thank you for your comments on the submitted draft. I think the tenses in the draft are correct. Ongoing events in the present tense and past events in the past tense. If you have spotted specific tense mistakes, could you please point them out to me? I'd be happy to fix them if that helps. Belchford (talk) 09:46, 26 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you @Johannes Maximilian for helping out with the grammar. I noticied the draft has been classified as 'start-class'. Was that your assessment or is it done automatically? Is there anything else I can or should do other than wait for the decision on the draft? I'd appreciate it if you had the time and patience to guide me as a newbie through the process. Belchford (talk) 10:30, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Doppelganger Releasing
Hi @Johannes Maximilian, I'm hoping you can help advise on the draft I've begun about Doppelganger Releasing, a company whose credits I have listed and cited from secondary sources. Can you please assist with creating a page for our company that will be approved? Doppelgangerreleasing (talk) 18:26, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Draft: Village Enterprise revision
Hi @Johannes Maximilian,

Thank you for your review of Draft: Village Enterprise. I've added timestamps to the BBC radio program as you've suggested. I've also re-attributed footnote 1 to the BBC program (note that previously it was attributed to Marketplace, a program that runs on NPR). I've removed the sentence that required footnote two about Village Enterprise's mission. That seemed to be causing problems as a primary source.

Apologies for these sourcing errors, I had looked at some other pages and saw it was common for companies and nonprofits to often have a primary source as one of their first ones to include the mission statement, including Apple Inc., Facebook, Amazon (company) — as well as other nonprofits similar to Village Enterprise such as One Acre Fund, The BOMA Project, Charity: Water.

Would you be able to review the page again now that these edits have been made? I really appreciate you reviewing the page and providing feedback. BrettSlezak (talk) 18:37, 12 July 2024 (UTC)


 * The page was approved by another editor over the weekend, so please ignore my comments above. Thanks again for your reiview! BrettSlezak (talk) 14:48, 15 July 2024 (UTC)

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Submission Declined
hi Johannes Maximilian,

I 've noticed that you've declined a draft under this name "Pierre Timaitre". I understand that wikipedia must have his own way of verifying online sources, however all the informations given had been verified by the french wikipedia team.

I've given all the sources and the online links for them to be verified and knowing the fact all these informations are about me, i can guarantee you that they're legit.

Let me know if there is something else that need to be done.

Btw, i've been contacted via IG to help me "fix" this issue in exchange for some money..

Best Regards. Phantomlord66 (talk) 06:44, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Ramallah Friends Meeting (Quakers)
I have added a book citation to the introduction of Draft:Ramallah Friends Meeting (Quakers). Other sources and citations are from primary and secondary sources, including books, University papers, and associated organizations. I hope this satisfies the issue. If not, please let me know what manner of verifiable sourcing is lacking. Thank you. InquisitiveALot (talk) 17:26, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Christopher_McDonald_(booking_agent)
Hi! It is my third page I made. You reviewed it. I removed the source you mentioned. Can you please verify it? I checked the tone and sources there are reliable secondary sources. Producers and talent bookers are not those making appearance on the TV. They work on making those projects happen. It is a page about the significant producer of a big show in the US.

He was awarded an Emmy for his work on that show, which is the main award for the television. He is not an actor, but also joined a big film project Superman for a main role there. I do not even know what category it fall in. J2009j (talk) 21:21, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Request on 07:14:23, 15 July 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by ناتاشام
Greetings and respect, I need help regarding the topic of the article by explaining that several times the Khabar channel has aired TV interviews with Hami Mahmoudi on Iranian TV, and the video footage is also available. Tankyou

ناتاشام (talk) 07:14, 15 July 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Anurradha Prasad review
I've seen that you've rejected my draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Anurradha_Prasad with the reason "Please improve your external links section.", can you please suggest some some specific improvements can that can be done to this section? i'm really not sure what improvements can be done, should i add more links or is it about the layout? Ashish.gtr (talk) 07:48, 15 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Cheers, your recent edit is good, and I reckon that the issue with the external links section has been fixed. Best, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 15:16, 15 July 2024 (UTC)

Draft:BRYTER
Hello @Johannes Maximilian, I hope this message finds you well.

Per these commments on my talk page, I believe that notability is clearly met. Would you be willing to take a look and confirm? HelixUnwinding (talk) 14:13, 17 July 2024 (UTC)

DRAFT: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jeffrey_B._Perry
Hello! I know it was a while back but I was hoping if you had a second I could ask you a few questions about this page I've been working on. You declined and mentioned refbombing and overlinking. I agree it makes sense to remove some but was wondering if you could advise on which in particular are the most egregious before I change and then resubmit. Thank you! Here is the link to page again https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jeffrey_B._Perry 2601:86:103:7410:3A:EAAA:3F94:903D (talk) 17:26, 19 July 2024 (UTC)