User talk:Kerr0693
| This user is a student editor in Carleton_University/Analyzing_Cinema,_Gender,_and_Sexuality_(Fall_2018) . |
Welcome![edit]
Hello, Kerr0693, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.
Handouts
|
|---|
Additional Resources
|
|
If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:35, 20 September 2018 (UTC)
Ashley Altadonna[edit]
Minor Revisions Needed
- Detailed Career section, well done.
- Instead of "as well as an" put "and an activist" at the end of your lead sentence. Can the lead section be expanded?
- Add years to the list of Altadonna's films in the career section
- Review the Career section for incomplete sentences, such as "Altadonna's first film/documentary, Making the Cut" and fix
- All instances of film titles should be italicized
- Review for grammatical issues such as "This films campaign is what created Altadonna to become such an activist for transgender persons."