User talk:LaWr123

Your submission at Articles for creation: The McClure Twins (July 25)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Brad v  14:28, 25 July 2018 (UTC)


 * You have a response to you help desk question which I assume is related to the above information.— Vchimpanzee  •  talk  •  contributions  •  19:18, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: The McClure Twins (September 29)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Frayae was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The McClure Twins and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:The McClure Twins, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:The_McClure_Twins Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Frayae&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:The_McClure_Twins reviewer's talk page].
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&mdash; Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 10:42, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:The McClure Twins


Hello, LaWr123. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "The McClure Twins".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 19:19, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

Accepted submission
 The McClure Twins, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Killiondude (talk) 04:54, 12 August 2019 (UTC)
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Advice on page creation
Thank you so much for the kind words re: Scottie Beam, I do appreciate it. I also appreciate you contributing to her article! However, unsourced information can't remain on pages, especially biographies of living people. I'm going to add a "citation needed" tag to the sentence you added; please find a source and cite it when you can.

In terms of article creation and my advice to you: sourcing is absolutely vital to deciding when an article is ready to be moved out of draftspace. Generally, if I come across someone in pop culture that I'm unfamiliar with, I will look them up on Wiki. If they don't have a Wikipedia article, but there are several Google hits with coverage of them in WP:RS, I'll just go ahead and make the page. Sometimes I'll *want* to make a page for someone who doesn't have enough sources to meet Wiki standards for notability (i.e. WP:GNG, in which case I'll create a draft and incubate it there until sources appear.

Also, just in case you were unaware -- you don't have to go through the AfC process if your sourcing is sound. You can just move WP:MOVE the page into mainspace yourself, but please note that if the article subject doesn't meet the notability guidelines, it will surely be deleted. If it isn't deleted right away, it will likely be deleted when it is reviewed by the new page reviewers (I know about this process well because I am one). I use WP:RSP to get a sense of how sources are evaluated. It saves time and heartache to make sure the sourcing is strong, because my pages about Black women are sent to WP:AFD more than any other pages I write.

I hope this helps. Please let me know if there's any other way I can be helpful.

Thanks! Citrivescence (talk) 23:58, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

This is extremely helpful. Thank you so much!

You're absolutely right. I completely forgot about sourcing the addition to the Scottie Beam article. I'll be on the lookout for credible sources.

Otherwise, keep moving the culture forward!

LaWr123 (talk)