User talk:Makolon1

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Biscats (May 3)
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Hitro talk 10:24, 3 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for reviewing the "Draft:The Biscats". The draft submitted May 3rd, 2024 was cited not to meet WP:NBAND. I have made amendments to the draft and I have resubmitted it. Main amendments are shown below.
 * (1) To pass the criterion number 2, the information on the ranking of  a national music chart was added (See 3rd-4th lines of 2nd Paragraph, [5] and [6]).
 * (2) To pass the criterion number 4, the information on the tour was added (See 3rd Paragraph, Topic of Tour).
 * Note that [5] and [6] are based on the information of Billboard JAPAN  and Oricon listed as "Typical sources for record charts and archives, by country" (Japan) ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Record_charts ).
 * I believe that, after these amendments, the draft meets WP:BAND. Please review the draft again. If necessary, I will make revises on it. Makolon1 (talk) 08:18, 5 May 2024 (UTC)