User talk:Master WuGui

Your submission at Articles for creation: Berkeley Festival & Exhibition (December 22)
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 Qcne  (talk)  21:42, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Berkeley Festival & Exhibition (December 25)
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‍ ‍ Relativity ‍  ‍  21:10, 25 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Berkeley Festival & Exhibition (December 31)
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DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:38, 31 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Berkeley Festival & Exhibition (February 5)
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S0091 (talk) 18:15, 5 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Master WuGui, I found some additional sources from the LA Times and NYT which I have added to the draft. You should use those to expand it.  I am not finding much written about it in the last decade though other than standard announcements.  Note that a Wikipedia article should summarize what secondary sources say about a subject and if most of the coverage is from years ago, then that is what the focus of the article should be.  S0091 (talk) 19:59, 5 February 2024 (UTC)