User talk:Remy.2005

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Hello, Remy.2005, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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I moved your article back to your sandbox because it isn't ready for mainspace yet. I've liked to a couple resources that can help you improve some of these issues. Pages 7-9 in the Editing Wikipedia brochure has a lot of information about layout that's really helpful, while the Biographies handout includes the normal sections you'd expect in a biography Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:25, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
 * A Wikipedia article should begin with a lead section that summarises all the major points of the article. As a terse summary, it should rarely include quotes.
 * Wikipedia articles don't refer to people by their first names. Either use their full name, or just their surname.
 * Quotes should be brief - generally 3-5 words, very rarely more than a full sentence. And they should be placed in context.
 * You should rely more on reliable secondary sources. I'm not sure about the specifics of the periodicals you're using (I don't have access) but they seem like they're in-house periodicals, not journalistic sources that are going to do a lot of fact-checking and independent reporting. They're nice additional sources, but they aren't enough to establish notability.