User talk:Rmeares01

Incomplete DYK nomination
Hello! Your submission of Template:Did you know nominations/Eastern Desert at the Did You Know nominations page is not complete; if you would like to continue, please link the nomination to the nominations page as described in step 3 of the nomination procedure. If you do not want to continue with the nomination, tag the nomination page with db-g7, or ask a DYK admin. Thank you. DYKHousekeepingBot (talk) 03:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing your DYK nomination
Welcome to Wikipedia and congrats on submitting your first DYK nomination! I haven't yet begun reviewing, but at first glance it's a very impressive initial attempt at article creation. Thanks for your effort and enthusiasm. You'll do well here. I will take a liberty in pointing you towards Help:How to write the perfect "Did you know" hook. I think your first hook, while apparently accurate and well-cited, is a bit on the "obvious" side. Look at the hooks you see on the main page. Think about the weirdest, most compelling things you found in your article research. Find a way to ask those questions in a sly, provocative manner. The essay I've linked will help guide you. Reviewers don't often approach a nominator like this, but as an occasional new page creator myself I wanted to express my delight that I get to review your first work. BusterD (talk) 19:30, 29 May 2021 (UTC)

DYK nomination of Eastern Desert
Hello! Your submission of Eastern Desert at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) at your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! BusterD (talk) 21:51, 29 May 2021 (UTC)

Hello, thank you very much for reviewing my submission. Thank you especailly for pointing out the plagarism in the article. The features section was there when I first got the article as a stub and I didn't think to check if there were copyright issues but I will remove it right away. Do you know how I might be able to change the hook for my article submission? Or is it too late now? Thank you again Rmeares01 (talk) 04:00, 30 May 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for your reply, but let's keep all discussion about the DYK over at the DYK template so we don't miss each other's comments. BusterD (talk) 16:11, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I've made a suggestion for your most recent hook. Take a look and tell me what you think. BusterD (talk) 01:44, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
 * It appears the hook is in prep 2 at this time, which means it would appear on the main page 6/6/2021 at 0:00 UTC. I don't know your location (and I'm not asking to know), but this would be 8pm EDT in New York or 5am IST in most of India or 10am AEST in Canberra. Congrats. You'll get an official notice when it goes live on the main page. Tell your teacher, if they don't already know. Nice work and well-done! Don't feel shy about improving something else! BusterD (talk) 08:37, 3 June 2021 (UTC)

DYK for Eastern Desert
&mdash; Amakuru (talk) 00:03, 6 June 2021 (UTC)