User talk:Soman/Archives/2017/April

DYK nomination of Lalchand Fulamali
Hello! Your submission of Lalchand Fulamali at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Yoninah (talk) 21:11, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Soman, you need to supply a new hook. The request was made on March 26, so this needs to be done soon. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:29, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I honestly don't understand what you're doing. The problem with the earlier hook was that it was talking about his arrests, and now you propose a hook about him being jailed. (It doesn't help that there is no context about what a "food movement" is and why jail time would be involved.) Please try again, and remember that the hook needs to be interesting to a wide audience. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:12, 1 April 2017 (UTC)

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