User talk:Tif0409/Beef noodle soup

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@Tif0409: I'm look at this page that shows the changes you've made. My sense is that you've added a few references, added a little bit of text, and done a bunch of reorganization work. This all seems pretty great!

If you want to add more new content based on material from new reliable sources, I think that would be good. In general though, the work you've done seems to be good and I think you can copy your changes back into the mainspace and work on them there.

You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might.

So do a final pass and try to address any of the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then go ahead and make it live. —mako๛ 02:58, 14 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Tif0409: Your article is in good shape and I really like the way you make it more appealing by adding various images. One suggestion I have is to create a specific section for the history of beef noodle soup instead of squeezing them in the Lead section, since the amount of the information may be adequate enough to have its own designated area of description. Nice work!--Alex.yuan011995 (talk) 15:25, 17 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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