User talk:WarmKomorebi

Your submission at Articles for creation: Semantic Brand Score (April 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Geardona were:

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Geardona (talk to me?) 21:57, 3 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi @Geardona thank a lot for your support and help with the SBS page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Semantic_Brand_Score.
 * I have edited the draft following your suggestions (making the content different from the previously deleted page and adding verifyeable and reputable secondary sources). I think the previous page was deleted mostly because, at the time, there were no real secondary sources. I have found many now (which also describe the metric in details) and added them to the article. I have also made the page differente from the previous. But I am new here :). Can you help me and tell me if it looks good to you and I can now resubmit? WarmKomorebi (talk) 10:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * It still needs more citations, preferably 1+ per paragraph. You can resubmit at any time and a different reviewer will go over it. It still looks similar to the deleted version, have you read the deletion discussion? It may have helpful info. Geardona (talk to me?) 11:15, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you I added all citations that I have found. I read the old discussion when one citation only was available, but now I found several, also listed in the article talk page.
 * Thanks a lot for your suggestion I will try resubmit. Should I remove your comments or just click on resubmit? WarmKomorebi (talk) 11:19, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Just click on resubmit, leave the comments be. Geardona (talk to me?) 11:24, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Semantic Brand Score (July 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Semantic Brand Score and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 10:18, 4 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks a lot for your suggestion! I edited the article to use a proper formal tone and with a neutral point of view. I am resubmitting. Please let me know if you see any additional edit that shuold be made in this regard (or it would be great if you want to change the article directly). WarmKomorebi (talk) 16:54, 4 July 2024 (UTC)