Wikipedia:Articles for improvement/Nominations/Archives/2017/5

Roundabout (play)


✅. North America1000 08:15, 2 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Improvable start-class article. North America1000 05:58, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. – Corinne (talk) 03:30, 24 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom – gwendy (talk) 14:14, 28 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support it should be suggested as an article for translation on meta. It needs more sources.--Alexmar983 (talk) 06:15, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Arabic coffee
✅. North America1000 03:06, 4 May 2017 (UTC)
 * (Tremendously disorganized, citations which don't support material, very poor English) Akhooha (talk) 21:25, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. – Corinne (talk) 03:29, 24 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom – gwendy (talk) 02:17, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support. North America1000 03:06, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Great Khorasan
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
 * This article has had the "Multiple issues" tag since March 2013. It gets 541 daily page views, which is not insubstantial. The area is also somewhat related to current events.  – Corinne (talk) 15:59, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom – gwendy (talk) 20:32, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

List of ghosts
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
 * List article that can be expanded with descriptions, more sources, images, etc. North America1000 11:50, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Oppose, as the list links to the individual pages which themselves hold the sources and images. Ladysif (talk) 08:04, 6 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Oppose, as per Ladysif reasons. EvilxFish (talk) 16:13, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

Indian campaign of Alexander the Great
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 * The article has had a "multiple issues" tag at the top since 2014. Besides a lack of citations, I think there are formatting issues; for example, at 125%, the text in Indian campaign of Alexander the Great is squeezed into a long narrow vertical column down the middle of the page. Perhaps more information could be found to add to the article. – Corinne (talk) 03:22, 24 April 2017 (UTC) Decided qualifying adverbs unnecessary. – Corinne (talk) 15:10, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Cider house
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Expandable stub. North America1000 06:22, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I can propose this for meta "transaltion of the week" if improved.--Alexmar983 (talk) 01:26, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - The popularity of cider has greatly increased in the last few years. I'm sure more could be found to add to the article. – Corinne (talk) 03:24, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Sports radio

 * Lots of content, but few sources. Would also benefit from further organization. North America1000 16:15, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support yup, this one needs a lot of tlc – gwendy (talk) 13:34, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom. I'm sure there is a lot of material that could be added to this article. – Corinne (talk) 03:35, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Stub-class article, about an NFL player who needs more content, since he is currently a starter.  Spike789    🇺🇸   19:21, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom – gwendy (talk) 12:41, 5 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom.  – Corinne (talk) 03:35, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Mobile ticketing
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Needs work, and has a total of two references as of this post. North America1000 22:58, 5 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom – gwendy (talk) 17:06, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom.  – Corinne (talk) 03:33, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

The Piccadilly Rats
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Expandable stub. North America1000 11:18, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support Interesting topic! – gwendy (talk) 17:21, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom.  – Corinne (talk) 03:33, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Lunch lady
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Expandable start-class article. North America1000 04:54, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom – gwendy (talk) 12:40, 5 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - per nom.  – Corinne (talk) 03:31, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Dollar store (Cuba)
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 19 May 2017 (UTC)
 * An expandable stub-class article. North America1000 07:23, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

Pain psychology
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 19 May 2017 (UTC)
 * This is an entire different segment of Psychology that has not been explored on the Encyclopedia, yet - now could be a good time! TopCipher (talk) 17:53, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom, but note that the article gets only 3 hits per day. – Corinne (talk) 03:39, 24 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Oppose - This article is brand new (12 April 2017), created by the nominator, and in really good shape&mdash;it's even been nominated for WP:DYK! – gwendy (talk) 13:13, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

Turkey bowling
(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Improvable/expandable c-class article. North America1000 10:22, 27 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support per nom – gwendy (talk) 14:07, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Slider (sandwich)


(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Expandable stub-class article. North America1000 07:06, 27 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support NOMNOMNOM – gwendy (talk) 14:16, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Hundred Islands National Park


(automated closure) No further input after 21 days &mdash;  MusikBot talk 04:35, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Improvable start-class article about a national park in the Philippines. For example, it has a Fauna section, but no flora section, needs more references, and can be expanded. North America1000 20:26, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - per nom. – Corinne (talk) 03:26, 24 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support per nom – gwendy (talk) 14:17, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Tattoo
✅. North America1000 22:48, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Multiple issues for a viral article: needs lead expansion, citations – gwendy (talk) 02:33, 30 April 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support – a multifaceted topic; the article can be improved. North America1000 08:17, 2 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support I agree, it is quite important.--Alexmar983 (talk) 15:09, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support - I agree. – Corinne (talk) 21:26, 20 May 2017 (UTC)

Fish sauce


✅. North America1000 19:53, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Can be improved. A good starting point would be for issues per the four maintenance templates atop the article to be addressed. North America1000 06:23, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - Qwertyxp2000 (talk &#124; contribs) 10:29, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support - Per nom. Perhaps some articles like Bagoong could be merged. – Corinne (talk) 21:30, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support – per nom. – &#x1D558; wendy &#124; &#9742;  17:03, 23 May 2017 (UTC)

Government of India
✅. North America1000 21:20, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
 * A very important article about the government of the worlds largest democracy ,cited by many websites and books. The article itself doe not have enough in-line citations and needs expansion in some portions. FORCE RADICAL (talk) 06:52, 19 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) Support - I agree. The article lacks citations. Also, some of the statistics, such as in the Budgets and Deficits sections, are out of date. – Corinne (talk) 21:34, 20 May 2017 (UTC) I added the daily page views number. It gets an extraordinarily high number of daily hits, supporting the nominator's statement that it is a very important article.  – Corinne (talk) 21:36, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 2) Support – Certainly improvable, and an easy topic to research. North America1000 09:55, 21 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 3) Support – per nom & others – &#x1D558; wendy &#124; &#9742;  20:04, 23 May 2017 (UTC)