Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Michael Medved/archive1

Michael Medved
An incredible article. It perfectly states his accomplishments, his history, and it meets all the criteria (I think)


 * Weak Support An well written article, but the lead sentances could be a tad stronger. 11kowrom 17:11, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose Needs inline citations, not external links in the text. Lead needs to be expanded. Simpsons info should be integrated into text, trivia sections are never really that great. Getting there though. Cvene64 17:45, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Oppose I second Cvene64's objections, in that there needs to be inline citations and that the trivia section needs to be integrated into the main article.--P-Chan 06:24, 23 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Strong Oppose Lead section needs to be more selective and detailed. Sections and sub sections to be slightly more organised - the 'Early life' section features information on what Medved is currently up to.  Too many redlinks towards the end - the article for celebrity bastard parents should be created (or don't make it a link).  The article generally needs to feel more like a whole article, and less like lots of fragmented information.   Nuge talk 17:57, 18 May 2006 (UTC)