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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 28 October 2018 (UTC).

List of Andorra international footballers

 * Nominator(s): Kosack (talk) 19:57, 30 September 2018 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I have created this article based upon two of my recent FL promotions (Azerbaijan and Wales). I believe this meets the same standards as those. I look forward to any comments. Kosack (talk) 19:57, 30 September 2018 (UTC)


 * Support TompaDompa (talk) 16:18, 8 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * This sentence is a real minefield: "They are governed by the Andorran Football Federation (AFF) and compete as a member of UEFA,[1] which encompasses the countries of Europe and Israel, where they are one of the smallest members." The team are one of the smallest members of UEFA?  Surely they have the same number of players as everyone else?  Do you mean that the country of Andorra is the smallest to have a football team which is a member of UEFA?  If so, that needs re-wording.  Also, I'd find a way to move that bit right after UEFA, otherwise it could be read that they are one of the smallest members of Israel??  Also, "they are one of" is a bit of a grammatical entanglement - they are (plural) one (singular) of something....?
 * More to come later...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:09, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look, I've dropped that small part now. Trying to work it in would have left the rest a bit muddled. Kosack (talk) 18:04, 2 October 2018 (UTC)


 * "The Andorra national football team has......the national team were forced to wait" - is the team plural or singular?
 * "They are governed by the Andorran Football Federation (AFF) and member of UEFA" - plural/singular confusion again
 * "Spanish-born defender Ildefons Lima is the nation's most capped player in history" - don't think the last two words are needed
 * "He became the record holder after surpassing the previous holder Óscar Sonejee on 16 August 2017 after playing in a friendly match against Qatar." - not mad on "after.....after". Maybe try "He broke the record held by Óscar Sonejee on 16 August 2017 after playing in a friendly match against Qatar."
 * "he was appointed manager of national side" - the national side
 * "If the number of caps are equal" - "If the number of caps is equal" (the subject is "number", which is singular)
 * Think that's it from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:52, 3 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing, I think I've fixed the issues raised above. Let me know if there's anything else. Kosack (talk) 09:07, 3 October 2018 (UTC)
 * You've still got "the national team was forced to wait three years before making their official debut until they". Probably best to treat the team as plural throughout..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:32, 3 October 2018 (UTC)
 * I think I've sorted the issue now, let me know if I missed any. Kosack (talk) 12:36, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks all good to me now - support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:32, 9 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Support my issues addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:42, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Source review passed, no issues found when I looked through, promoting. -- Pres N  04:49, 27 October 2018 (UTC)


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