Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of international goals scored by Ellen White/archive1


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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:26, 25 March 2023 (UTC).

List of international goals scored by Ellen White

 * Nominator(s): Idiosincrático (talk) 06:48, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

Hi all, Ellen White is England Women's top scorer who also played for GB at 2x Olympics, recently retired. I've spent a few weeks on the list and I think it covers everything well, I mostly referred to Alfredo Di Stéfano's equivalent as its slightly uncommon to have played for two nations. As with most of these kind of lists, problems are usually systematic and an easy fix. Much appreciated :) Idiosincrático (talk) 06:48, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

Comments

 * I'd be tempted to use the uncropped version of the lead image, as IMO landscape images work better in the lead and the existing one looks very small. Not a deal-breaker, though
 * Image caption: "she played 113 games for England and eight for Great Britain at two Summer Olympics" reword so it doesn't sound like all 121 games took place at the Olympics
 * "White would win the 2022 UEFA Women's Championship" => "White won the 2022 UEFA Women's Championship"
 * "She would score her first international hat-trick" => "She scored her first international hat-trick"
 * "She'd score a second hat-trick" => "She scored a second hat-trick"
 * "White would score her final goal" => "White scored her final goal"
 * "She announced her international retirement on the 22 August 2022" => "She announced her international retirement on 22 August 2022"
 * "She played all four matches for Great Britain at the tournament before being knocked out" - reword as she wasn't personally knocked out
 * Dutch needs a capital D
 * "Despite scoring a hat-trick, Great Britain would leave the tournament" => "Although she scored a hat-trick, Great Britain left the tournament"
 * Wikilink the Australian team in the last sentence of the lead
 * Second image caption should not have a full stop as it isn't a complete sentence
 * Is it normal to link only the stadia in these lists, not the location? I don't think places like Doncaster are so internationally well-known that a link is not needed under whatever the policy is (I can't remember) that says not to link well-known place names
 * Think that's it :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:55, 1 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks @ChrisTheDude, I addressed most things. I didn't wikilink the Australian team in the last sentence of the lead as I already linked it within the second lead para, as I did with Latvia and the 2020 tournament when I mentioned them a second time. Please let me know if I've done something wrong there. As for the stadia location links, I wasn't too sure either. Other international goal articles are all inconsistent, including featured lists. I did however notice someone refer to MOS:GEOLINK to justify having only having the stadia linked but I'm not entirely sure if that applies here. I'd be happy todo either. Cheers again. Idiosincrático (talk) 01:02, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
 * I'd personally suggest linking the towns unless they are massively well-known ones like London..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:05, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Done @ChrisTheDude, Cheers. Idiosincrático (talk) 11:51, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:54, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Support -- Phikia (talk) 07:32, 4 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Support -- 金色黎明 (talk) 13:36, 13 March 2023 (UTC)

Closing, promoted. -- Pres N  03:09, 25 March 2023 (UTC)


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