Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/NWA World Welterweight Championship/archive4


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NWA World Welterweight Championship

 * Nominator(s): MPJ-DK (talk) 21:22, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

This has been nominated three times prior, twice failed due to lack of input and once i withdrew to work on the sources. I have reworked the sources to make my latest FL (Mexican National Tag Team Championship), I've done a round of copy editing and I've had the Guild of Copy Editors work through it as well. I believe this represents a very fine body of work both prose, table and source wise and hope this will get enough attention this time. I will happily commit to doing a FL review for each person providing feedback PLUS one, which I will initate in the next day or two. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:22, 7 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:00, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Support Very good article ~ HAL  333  00:13, 12 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Support, all my concerns have been resolved, nice work. Harrias  talk 07:53, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Source review:
 * The formatting for the Duncan & Will source is all over the place; I was going to try to fix it but I can't be sure I'm doing it right. Ref 11, 12, 13, and 33 are e.g. "Duncan & Will 2000, p. 271.", but all of the other ones are e.g. "Duncan & Will (2000) page 390 "Karloff Lagarde 58/01/31 Mexico City, MEX"", except for ref 1, which is "Duncan & Will (2000) p. 390, Chapter: "Mexico: EMLL NWA Welterweight Heavyweight Title [Lutteroth]"". You actually cite page 390 in 3 different formats as a result. I'd expect them all to be e.g. "Duncan & Will (2000) p. 390" (with a "p." instead of page, and no period at the end), maybe with the quotes you're adding to the back if you really want them, though make sure to have a period after the page number to separate out the quote in that case, e.g. Duncan & Will (2000) p. 390. "blah blah"
 * Several other book sources are fully described in the references instead of short-style, which reads oddly as now everything is mixed. Consider moving all books to a "Sources" section, instead of only the 2 "General" books.
 * This general/non-general split also causes issues in e.g. refs 9 and 10- full duplicated refs to the same book, with slightly different page numbers (actually, overlapping)
 * In ref 3 and 5, you have the author as L.L. Staff- author fields are for named people only, and should be omitted if you only have "staff" as a byline.
 * You're doing some odd things with magazine issues- using cite news for a magazine which then forces you to do "|id=issue 2072" instead of "|issue=2072", and results in odd placement/formatting of the issue number in the final citation.
 * You don't really need to include incorporation marks in company names, e.g. ", Inc." or ", SA de CV"
 * Not required, but consider using the "|trans-title=" parameter to give English translations of non-English titles.
 * Didn't see any issues with the sources themselves. -- Pres N  22:03, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your input I will get to work on the feedback today. MPJ-DK (talk) 11:43, 3 August 2020 (UTC)
 * I believe I addressed all issues. MPJ-DK (talk) 15:13, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

Giants2008 ( Talk ) 22:13, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
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