Wikipedia:Peer review/American Dream/archive1

If you look at the last line of the first paragraph, you find someone unequivocally states what they believe the "American Dream" is, which I dispute. As I read through the article, I found more and more that this article needs a thourough think-through and discussion of what the "American Dream" really is and should reflect the ambiguities of its conceptual nature. It's not quite neutral, and it isn't, in my opinion, geared toward concept.

In addition, sections such as criticism do not have citations and are highly controversial, and the entire article needs a recheck and a rethink. --Mystalic 20:46, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

I've just re-read, many improvements, but one of my key compaints I've outlined in the talk page of the article. Good job guys! --Mystalic 00:31, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

i agree --Nukethewales 14:58, 27 October 2006 (UTC)