Wikipedia:Peer review/Bedfordshire/archive1

Bedfordshire
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it has real potential for development, and is very important. It is rated as high importance by both WikiProject England and WikiProject UK geography, yet it is currently a lowly B-class. I would like to find out what improvements I could make to get this article to either GA or A.

Thanks, Acather96 (talk) 20:37, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

Maxim comments  Maxim (talk)  01:30, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
 * To be honest, the article is still quite stubby.
 * Many sections aren't written, so they should be
 * Many sections are written very choppily, e.g. one-sentence paragraphs. I tweaked the Geography section a bit in that regard, but you need to work especially on the lead, as it's five choppy sentences (and five choppy paragraphs)
 * Many sections are missing citations.
 * Use existing FAs as a model for the article, e.g. Greater Manchester
 * To sum up my advice in a nutshell: the improvements to be made right now are the article's expansion and referencing. After that, you should submit again to peer review for more in-depth suggestions.