Wikipedia:Peer review/FC Bayern Munich/archive2

FC Bayern Munich
I've listed this article for peer review because... Although I haven't really done anything on this article I think that it is pretty close to FA status and would like to get others take on it.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, REDMAN 2019 (talk) 12:21, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

Comments by Kosack

Not a full review right now, but there's some obvious major issues with the article. In its current state, I don't think this would pass a GA review without some work.


 * There are lots of paragraphs that are partially or completely unsourced.
 * The history section seems a little too slanted towards recent events. For example, the "Robbery" section (not sure on that heading by the way) has eight paragraphs for the last decade. The first section has six for the first 65 years of the club.
 * A few outstanding tags dotted around, citation, clarification and dubious tags all in place.
 * It's quite a hefty article, some of the information may be better placed in standalone pages. For example, I would probably remove the statistics section, or substantially reduce it.

Just a few quick thoughts to get started. Kosack (talk) 08:48, 20 July 2020 (UTC)