Wikipedia:Peer review/History of York City F.C./archive2

History of York City F.C.


This peer review discussion has been closed. I'm looking to see how this article could be further improved. The main problem is the prose which could use a good cleaning up, and so I have added it to the requests at WP:LOCE, but I'd like to get suggestions from the wider community. The ultimate goal is WP:FA, which will help contribute to York City F.C.'s push to WP:FT. Thanks, Mattythewhite (talk) 16:21, 14 February 2008 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 02:50, 18 February 2008 (UTC)