Wikipedia:Peer review/Irna Phillips/archive1

Irna Phillips
I have been trying to beef up this article and added it to nomination for the biographical collaboration. I would like to know what others think of the way it is strutured, check the prose and grammar, and fact check by individuals who are more knowedable about her than I am ( I have mostly utilized the books "Worlds Without End", "Prime Time, Prime Movers", & "All Her Children". I do not have access to a copy of Harding LeMay's autobiograph 8 Years in Another World so if anyone has a copy of that and can find some good information to add it would be great. I am also hoping someone can add more information from interviews with William J. Bell who looks to have had much more prolonged contact with her than Agnes Nixon who in 1976 shortly after Phillips' death actually comes off a little bitter (albeit stil very greatful) of the treatment she received from her mentor when she moved to New York (okay I know Nixon lives in Pencilvania but still her shows are made there and just like Phillips she frequenly made the train trip). Thanks for any assistance. Dowew 02:40, 28 October 2005 (UTC)