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Iron and Steel Industry in India
I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like to clear the issues associated with the article

Thanks, Bismuth 123 (talk) 11:44, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

What an interesting page, ! I quite like the overview of the history of steel and iron in India. Here are some thoughts from the review: Overall it's clear you've put a lot of effort into this article. Nice work. --Tom (LT) (talk) 23:52, 15 January 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) The article would benefit from the tables being included in written text, rather than a series of tables, which are difficult to read.
 * 2) The first half of the article would benefit from more citations
 * 3) The history section is really interesting
 * 4) The article overall would benefit from more Wikilinks so that readers can go to articles about related areas (such as about the major steel companies and regions of India)
 * 5) Most articles are titled in lowercase except for names, so this article should probably be titled Iron and steel industry in India.

As Tom (LT) said, an interesting article indeed. I think a few things could be done for the benefit of the article. Quite an informative article overall.  Ergo Sum  21:56, 20 January 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Under exports, if such data is available, break down yearly export quantities as the import section does.
 * 2) A picture in the lede would do well.
 * 3) Although there is a bibliography, inline citations for the number-heavy portions would be good.
 * 4) Some areas could use copy editing, so requesting that at WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors would go a long way.
 * 5) I reiterate Tom (LT)'s #5