Wikipedia:Peer review/James Brown/archive1

James Brown
Today, Christmas Day, the music world has mourned the death of one of its great heroes: the "Godfather of Soul", the "Hardest Working Man in Showbiz". Hence my first PR request in months: improvement, it seems, has just started, but what more needs to be done? --Slgr @ ndson (page - messages - contribs) 19:06, 25 December 2006 (UTC)

Some suggestions: -- Underneath-it-All 19:58, 25 December 2006 (UTC)
 * The trivia section should be merged with the rest of the article (most articles are moving away from trivia sections)
 * A rationale of fair use should be written for all the album covers used in the article
 * If a free image can be found, it should be used as the pictures in the infobox
 * More references need to be added throughout the article
 * Maybe the singles section could be cut in half or placed into a table, which would make it neater

Here are my suggestions: Kaldari 05:10, 26 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Delete the Pop culture references section.
 * Use "Brown", not "Mr. Brown".
 * Add a lot more citations, especially for controversial claims.