Wikipedia:Peer review/Jona discography/archive1

Jona discography


I've been working on this article for a while now and I want it to improve better. I know there's alot to improve so I want to know if the lead is okay and/or if the sections are okay too. Looking forward to your comments.

Thanks, Loibird90 (talk) 10:52, 20 September 2023 (UTC)