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List of Star Trek: The Original Series episodes

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2009.

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It's been a month since the last time this article was peer reviewed, and I've put a whole lot of effort into overhauling the whole thing. The only remaining task I have left is to rewrite the episode summaries for "Season 2" and "Season 3," and then I intend to nominate it as a Featured List. (| Here's what the page looked like before I started.) I'd appreciate any comments or suggestions on what I've done so far. -- Aatrek / TALK 16:51, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Comments by David Fuchs
 * It's looking good, and as loath as I am to let someone break my 100% domination on Star Trek Featured content, I guess I'll have to let it slide :P Some comments:
 * Perhaps for verification purposes, you could ref the plot summaries to the star trek.com recaps.
 * [[Image:Symbol_support2_vote.svg|13px]] Good thinking. The summaries need more expansion for sure, but what's there is sourced, at least. -- Aatrek / TALK 20:32, 4 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Some statements are unsourced and should probably be, such as Whitney's appearances in later films and Voyager, and The Animated Series' air date.
 * "NBC eventually surrendered to the fans' demand" -> a touch POV language there?
 * [[Image:Symbol_support2_vote.svg|13px]] Adjusted.-- Aatrek / TALK 20:10, 4 June 2009 (UTC)


 * The mustard (or should I say command gold) dividers between eps in season 1 are missing their left and right borders (season 2 and 3 seem to have them).
 * [[Image:Symbol_support2_vote.svg|13px]] It's actually an optical illusion; the colored dividers actually display OVER the borders, and the gold is light enough to seem to disappear. I've darkened the gold color to hopefully alleviate some of that. -- Aatrek / TALK 20:10, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

-- Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 21:14, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Looking through other List of/Season TV articles, it seems like the episode synopsis go into slightly more detail (as in revealing the conclusion of the episode). Since you're providing more than a single line synopsis anyhow, maybe you should just give a concise paragraph outline for the full thing. Ep lists aren't really consistent about this sort of thing.