Wikipedia:Peer review/Liverpool F.C./archive3

Liverpool F.C.
Previous peer review can be found here

New peer review as part of WikiProject Football/Liverpool task force drive to get this article to FA standard. NapHit 13:11, 7 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 19:03, 7 October 2007 (UTC)

A couple of quick comments:
 * Remove minor staff members such as masseur, kit man, assistant scout etc. The article isn't a club directory.
 * The club culture section deteriorates in the second half. Mention of an alleged rivalry with Chelsea is pure recentism, and the reference to the film 51st State is inconsequential. Oldelpaso 15:03, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Taking a look at that section, you're clearly right about how it deteriorates, it's probably the weakest section of the article as it stands. I will try and do something about it. However I'm not so sure about the reference to the film 51st State being inconsequential - Liverpool and Anfield are central to the plot of the film, so I would have thought it was worth a mention? Robotforaday 17:57, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
 * My point of view is that while Liverpool may be of importance to the film, the film is not of importance to the football club. Kind like how Liverpool are central to the biography of Rob Jones, but the converse is not true ;) Oldelpaso 12:22, 13 October 2007 (UTC)
 * You may well be right, it's not a major point for me - but I would like to see what the consensus is on this before doing anything like removing it myself. More broadly, I've deleted some of the recentism and tagged some of the assertions in the club culture section as needing referencing. Robotforaday 20:21, 14 October 2007 (UTC)