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Lucy Lawless


This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it is a good article and it meets with the criteria.

Thanks, Ineversigninsodonotmessageme (talk) 00:00, 10 February 2008 (UTC)Ineversigninsodonotmesssageme


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There are a few general things that can be done to improve the article: Thats all I have for now. Not a detailed list. I think the article needs a bit of work before it could be considered for nomination at WP:GAC. - Shudde   talk  23:36, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to be expanded significantly as per WP:LEAD
 * There is a lack of references. This is a biography of a living person, so needs to be thoroughly referenced.
 * The personal life section could maybe be moved after the section on her career?
 * I think the section on her career playing Xena needs expansion; this is no doubt her most notable role, and really needs to be expanded.
 * Please wiki-link dates ie 13 October not 13 October.
 * There are quite a few one sentence paragraphs, short paragraphs are discouraged.
 * The inline citations should be formatted so that the title of the article and publisher are also included. The best idea may be to use the templates at Citation templates.