Wikipedia:Peer review/Mona Lisa/archive1

Mona Lisa

 * from the FAC:

''Was reading through this article and noticed it is not featured. It is a well writen article covering many aspects of the painting - history, sitter, the aesthetics. Even if it is not quite feature-worthy yet, please add constructive criticism to help make it such. --[[User:OldakQuill|Oldak Quill]] 10:22, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)''
 * Refer to Peer review; there's just too many things that need work. I've noted a few of them on the article's talk page, and have started to try and fix them. I agree that such an important painting deserves a featured article, but it's not there yet. &bull; Benc &bull; 21:42, 30 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * Agreed. It needs some fairly significant copy editing and structuring.  Eudyptes  22:15 30 Aug 2004  UTC


 * I have added a couple of restructuring suggestions to the todo on the talk page. I may come back and implement these is time allows. Filiocht 08:39, 10 Sep 2004 (UTC)