Wikipedia:Peer review/Path 15/archive1

Path 15
I've listed this article for peer review because I need ideas and suggestions on how to improve this article further. To me, it seems like the article is the best it could be for something that is written by a non-expert on the subject matter.

Thanks,

Hydrogen Iodide (HI!) 23:00, 21 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 01:01, 25 September 2007 (UTC)