Wikipedia:Peer review/Space Pilot 3000/archive1

Space Pilot 3000
I've listed this article for peer review because I think it has had a lot of improvement in the last couple months but I'm no longer sure what else could be done to improve it. I also hope to use lessons learned from this article to continue to improve other television episode articles. I'd like particular comments on how the article is doing in regards to WP:EPISODE. Any advice on what to get rid of and what to expand would be appreciated as well.

Thanks,

Stardust8212 23:18, 7 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 03:09, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

All of those lists at the bottom of the article (characters, Fansworth's inventions etc.) seem pretty trivial, and should probably be removed if you want to go to GA with this. But other than that, it does look good, and I can't see any other glaring problems. Good job. Gran2 07:58, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
 * I was thinking the same thing but they've been around for a long while so I didn't want to stomp on too many toes. I'll try moving them to the talk page and seeing if anyone has a better idea for them. Thanks for having a look! Stardust8212 02:26, 9 September 2007 (UTC)