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Tesco
Tesco is the biggest retailer in the UK and the 3rd largest in the world - It's come under a lot of controversy recently, and the article could be in better shape - I'd much appreciate some input on what could be done to help improve it. Many thanks Benbread 23:51, 19 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment
 * Many uncited statements.
 * Controversy section just a big list. In my opinion there should be an article on criticisms on Tesco and I suggest redirecting Tescopoly there. Further the new article should be in prose, not just bullet points.
 * Clubcard grossly under-described. The consensus is that Clubcard was one of, if not the most important factors in the company's recent success.
 * "Facts and figures" is a strange section. Is the rest of the article not facts and figures?
 * Intro should follow WP:LEAD.
 * Loads of single sentence paragraphs. This really hurts the flow of the article.
 * If this was ever to go for FA it would need major overhaul. Specifically the fact that it's only about ⅓ prose (⅓ tables etc and ⅓ lists). For example the acquisition timeline could be converted to prose and each one explained in context. Mark83 08:53, 20 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:41, 26 February 2007 (UTC)